Minggu, 01 Juni 2008

lost time

when the time went on

at last i remembered that s regretness

untill now the yime lost still follow me

i wish happiness for the future

iv been here wait the time will cme back

unless something has lost 

3 komentar:

alex_belex mengatakan...

makin buruk grammar dalam poetry, makin tinggi nilai seninya.

nofel mengatakan...

bukan hanya grammar tapi, spellingnya juga kurang diperhatikan. Mungkin juga ini Middle English.

alex_belex mengatakan...

ha...ha...ha...99x
jangan2 karna ketawa sore tadi karya rio tak muncul2 lagi...
ha...ha...ha...99x.........
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